Sabtu, 20 Februari 2016
KPI (Kebaktian Penyegaran Iman)
Last Tuesday, on the 16th of February, I went to a school event called KPI (Kebaktian Penyegaran Iman). It is a compulsary event, students must come even though they will not do any learning activity for that day. The students were the 7th and 8th grader because the 9th grader attended another school event. This event was to make the students fixed their problems in the help of Jesus Christ. It is told that through Jesus we can fixed any problems. We were told a verse by the priest,priest Widiya about John, John 2:1-11. It is about how Jesus turned water into wine with his power and made his disciples believe in him. After that, the priest told her past life which was very sad because she have encountered many hard problems and she had ever almost committed suicide.But,because of Jesus,she had now have a better life. Many of the students cried because of her stories and it just touched our heart. Through this event, students have become different and not to do the wrong things.
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I like the way you told the event. But there are few grammatical errors. Over all it is great ;)
BalasHapusi like this post. i found some grammar mistakes. maybe its better if you add some more moral lessons. it will make it even better! but you did a great thing because you explained the event well.
BalasHapusoverall, you have done this very well. grammar mistakes can be found in your story. you had already explained this quite detail. Great!
BalasHapusoverall, you have done this very well. grammar mistakes can be found in your story. you had already explained this quite detail. Great!
BalasHapusI found some grammatical mistakes but it doesn't really affect the story in your composition but it would be better if you pay more attention to your grammar. You explained the events of the day detailed enough. you did great!
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