MY SCHOOL, SMPK1
Come on and join my school, SMPK1 BPK Penabur.
It is located in St. HOS Tjokroaminoto no.157 Bandung. It is a junior high
school and was rewarded last tear for no.1 in the West Java. Seen from outside,
colored blue and white. Its not so big and its like covered with some houses.
It’s a three-floor building. The facilities are also good enough for the
students. There are a canteen, a library, 2 science labs, a music room, a dance
room, a kitchen, a clinic, an administration office, 3 basketball courts and
classrooms. The canteen food is also good enough but most is unhealthy. The
activities are very fun and exciting such as PORAK, PERAK, MAKSI and many other
else. PORAK is sports day where each class go against each other. The sports
are basketball, badminton, soccer (for boys only), and ping pong. The studies
are hard, students should really do hardworks and don’t give up for the
challenging task they will face to. On the other side, if you do good enough at
your studies, you can enhance it to another level such as joining several
competitions to make proud of your school. There are also rules in our school,
girls have to tie their hair every time and boys shouldn’t have their hair
touched their skin.
Overall, the
school is amazing and I hope that you can join me here! Don’t be scared to join
in because of the studies. FACT: Everyone felt that way though. The teachers
are also awesome! Maybe you will hear some negative critics about them from
your friends but, teachers just want to do the best for us. You can also have
benefits from our school. If you are smart and lucky, you can get scholarship
to Singapore. You don’t need to bring food from your home if it bothers you.
There is a canteen where you can buy different kinds of food. The school also
teach and fix our attitudes to others especially people who are older than us.
I think that is
all I can give you about the information of my school and I really look forward
if you want to join. Just tell me if you have decided with your parents.
i think the grammar that is used by you in this post is good enough. But, i think, there are some sentences that are not really necessary to be put in this passage . Overall is good.
BalasHapusi agreed with alicia catherina especially the comment about some sentences are not really necessary and i think i found a sentence that you put it twice
BalasHapusSome sentences are not necessary but the way you explained, it is very interesting. You did an impressive job and the grammar you used in this sentences are well done, there is no mistake because I couldn't spotted. You did a great job, well done, keep it up and GOD BLESS >.<
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BalasHapusI think you did this excellently. your composition is very interesting. you explain it in the interesting way although there are some sentences that are not necessary.
BalasHapusI think you did a great job although(like what Alicia C said) there are some sentence that aren't necessary to put in but you did great!
BalasHapusYou did a great job! But, i still can find 1 miss spelling. Please check the blog before you post it. it really bother you good writing. Good Luck!
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